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More on poetry

A continuation of the "on the crappiness of poetry", caused by the discovery of non-crappy poetry.

Just discovered another poet of the second-best class (see previous entry); Gizem Forta, one of my closest friends who never told me he was writing haikus until I found them on his website.

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shinkansen runs fast
soon I will be in kyoto
thinking of tokyo

(I open my sketchbook and find in far less elegant words:

Redwine drinking ladies in EuroCity seats,
cold air from ventilation,
alone with a cigarette as the tunel
speeds past in the morning,
heading for Copenhagen)

Gizem again:

catching jellyfish
in turbulent bosphorus
millions watching us

(from my harddisk:

into the Boaz,
the movement of ghost ships
& tankers Byzas did not see )